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This life isn’t what I expected
Too many mistakes chasing after me
I know I could try to get better
But is better what I need to be?

Some days I’ll try a bit harder
Put on a smile and get out of bed
Other times I’ll just close my eyes again
Pulling the covers up over my head

I’m not proud of the way’s I’ve been coping
With the way I dig my razor into my skin
Just a quick flash of metal
Waiting for my happiness to begin
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Some daysby finallyawaken

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2013-2014 finallyawaken
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Calexy Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
It's so sad, but deep, too. I think a lot of people can relate. <33 :huggle:
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finallyawaken Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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Mr-Sheppy Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It makes me feel kinda sad Waaaah! 
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finallyawaken Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know :( it sad poem
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Mr-Sheppy Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah; fo realz :| (Blank Stare) 
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CorSecAgent Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Concise, to the point. Has the feel of a Hallmark card from the Dark Side.
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finallyawaken Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Come to the dark side...We have hallmark cards!! Thank you ^.^
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Mr-Sheppy Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, am not gonna lie; that's funny.
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finallyawaken Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know ^.^ I made a funny
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Mr-Sheppy Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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