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I lay in bed
Staring at the moon
My mind starts to wander
(Is he looking at it too?)


The moon is lovely
Shining so bright
But my tears begin to fall
Wishing I was with him tonight


I just wish I could tell him
That makes feel like I'm home
But I lay in my bed
Crying all alone


There's a hole in my heart
Where I need him to be
I just want to hear his voice
Saying he loves me


The hours begin to pass
Yet I still do not sleep
My brain decides it will not rest
Thinking of you and me
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All aloneby finallyawaken

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2013-2014 finallyawaken
So I wrote this at 3 am Saturday morning...After no sleep for nearly 2 days before hand. :shrug: Not my best at ALL but...for a sleep deprived me...yeah
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finallyawaken Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^.^
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DontCryJennifer Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Rhyming rhyming rhyming yay! Rhyming rhyming rhymes!!!!
That was a song in my head ^_^
I is crazy
But I really like it, it's very simplistic :)
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finallyawaken Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

XD catchy!

thank you ^.^

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DontCryJennifer Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD hehehe
You is most welcome! :)
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:iconericjohn227:
well since my comment was blocked by DA again -,- (DA hates me!) lol i really like this one courty :) a lot 
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finallyawaken Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD thank you! I wonder why it keeps doing that o.o
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:iconericjohn227:
because i said something mushy about it and apparently DA hates me XD 
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finallyawaken Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD DA disproves of mushy....Like...Lizard disproves spock :D
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